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Mindset by *evilblondie:iconevilblondie:

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They tell me to write
I tell them I can't
They tell me to fly
I come crashing down
They tell me to breathe
I continue to choke
They tell me to survive
I tell them I won't

They beg me to save myself
I beg them to stop
They beg me to give in
I try and I try
They beg me to see
I have no eyes
They beg me to cry
I beg them for love

They swear my mind is broken
I swear they have no heart
They swear that they'll fix me
I start to scream and shout
They swear it isn't over
I swear it's finally done
They swear to find me
as I turn to run
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just something i wrote in class

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*Matthileo Nov 10, 2009, 2:17:47 PM
Wow. That's really good. I love it.

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:iconookami-no-getsuei:
~ookami-no-getsuei Nov 10, 2009, 7:53:00 PM
They say There is something wrong with me
I say I am fine
They say I need help
I say they need to F off
They say I'm the crazy one
I say I'm the only one that makes sense

F mainstream posers your works rock

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:iconxxshadowlunaxx:
~xxShadowLunaxx Nov 12, 2009, 6:10:00 PM
wow, so much emotion! i really like this, it seems very much like you believe your words, not like something you just made up [lol i probably make no sense]

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"If I make no sense, and what I say makes no sense, then that makes total sense." -Nathanael Huddleson
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*evilblondie Nov 13, 2009, 4:11:00 PM
actually that makes plenty of sense and thanks :D
:iconxxshadowlunaxx:
~xxShadowLunaxx Nov 15, 2009, 9:29:50 AM
*relieved*

anytime, really (:

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"If I make no sense, and what I say makes no sense, then that makes total sense." -Nathanael Huddleson
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